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Showing posts with label Imaginary Girls. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Imaginary Girls. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Imaginary Girls by Nova Ren Suma

Chloe's older sister, Ruby, is the girl everyone looks to and longs for, who can't be captured or caged. When a night with Ruby's friends goes horribly wrong and Chloe discovers the dead body of her classmate London Hayes left floating in the reservoir, Chloe is sent away from town and away from Ruby.

But Ruby will do anything to get her sister back, and when Chloe returns to town two years later, deadly surprises await. As Chloe flirts with the truth that Ruby has hidden deeply away, the fragile line between life and death is redrawn by the complex bonds of sisterhood.

So let me give you a play by play of my reactions while reading Invisible Sisters

"Okay..."
"Good imagery"
"That's a really good line!" *doggy ears the page*
"Exceptional writing, this is gonna be good!"
"Nnnnnnuuh I don't wanna go to bed, one more chapter"
"Where is this going?"
"I don't get it"
"I bet you..."
"Yup..."
"She did it."
"Well that was obvious"
"What the hell!"
"Wait"
"What"
"Ok."

And that is pretty much what I was thinking as I read the book. As you may have deduced from my play by play above, the best part of the novel was the beginning.  It was filled with fulfilling writing, beautiful lines and very much potential to be the next great YA book.  But as the novel progressed, the plot didn't.  I understood that Nova Ren Suma was taking her time to give the reader a clear view of Ruby, even though no one had a clear view of her.  Ruby was the character who was always blurring, lurking in a shadow but always in the spotlight. I loved that!  But my fondness for Ruby's character soon faded after the half way turn of the novel.  And although I ended up hating Ruby near the end of the novel, she still remained my favourite character, and in this book it's most likely either Chloe or Ruby.

It took too long for anything to actually happen, and once something did happen...it wasn't that great.  Imaginary Girls had so much potential to be a great story, but the end was predictable.  Something I would imagine happening at the season finale of Ghost Whisperer or some other paranormal related show.  It just didn't cut it for me.  Imaginary Girls...had a forgettable plot and quite a few plot holes.  I kept asking myself, "Why doesn't Chloe just ask Ruby to tell her?"  which probably would have saved quite a few chapters.
The solved mystery wasn't actually completely explained, which I didn't mind but once again it brought me back to the fact that it just wasn't worth the wait.

The few reviews of Imaginary Girls that I did read were either "hate it" or "bash it".  Although I won't bash it, I wasn't exactly amazed with it.  With Imaginary Girls, Nova Ren Suma has proved she has excellent writing qualities and has much success ahead of her.

 Haunting, creepy, beautiful, but predictable, Imaginary Girls did in fact leave an impression.  Her name is Ruby.  And Ruby gets the silver.